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Defending my Heart by ~Korasia-Lady:iconKorasia-Lady:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Mature Romance > Open


Unless you're serious about me
Don't bother...
Unless you're ready to try
I don't care...
Unless you think you can;

           wash away my fears with a smile;
                  take away my pain with your embraces;
                       and bring me happiness in life.

Don't toy with me;
My heart is more fragile than glass.

Don't feed me lies;
To sugar coat bitter truth.

Right now to be honest --  I just need a friend;
So hear my plea
Please don't deceive me.

and then I'll let you see my smile.
©2007-2008 ~Korasia-Lady
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on my mind >> I don't take to guys teasing very well >>; when guys start flirting with me or people compliment the way I look... I just don't know how to respond >> it doesn't mean that I don't like the attention it's just awkward *blushblush*

**EDIT** this is a personal matter where the people involved should know if it's them or not...if you are unsure then well it's probably not you so don't worry XD
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~IshiRodosha:iconIshiRodosha: Dec 7, 2007, 12:34:30 AM
Very simple, direct language. I like it, definately gets the point across.
~Korasia-Lady:iconKorasia-Lady: Dec 7, 2007, 4:16:45 AM
I'm glad you like it ^___^ I heard that guys need it in bold print to understand a message... no offense intended but I also heard that when girls try to be subtle about certain things many misunderstandings tend to take place. thus I tried to be as cut and dry as i could in a beautiful way ^_________^

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:spork:+:cheese:=:heart:
"And I would have succeeded, if it weren't for those God and Jesus fellows" ~ Eddie Izzard
~IshiRodosha:iconIshiRodosha: Dec 15, 2007, 1:23:49 AM
guys are simply more direct in general so we don't respond to subtleties naturally well, not that we can't we just don't most of the time
~Korasia-Lady:iconKorasia-Lady: Dec 15, 2007, 6:49:37 PM
hehe I'll have to find me one of those guys that does XDD hehe

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:spork:+:cheese:=:heart:
"And I would have succeeded, if it weren't for those God and Jesus fellows" ~ Eddie Izzard
~IshiRodosha:iconIshiRodosha: Dec 16, 2007, 10:54:57 AM
good luck with that ^^
~Korasia-Lady:iconKorasia-Lady: Dec 17, 2007, 12:33:00 AM
hehe thanks I need all the luck I can get XD hehe

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:spork:+:cheese:=:heart:
"And I would have succeeded, if it weren't for those God and Jesus fellows" ~ Eddie Izzard
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